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But she decides that with Mike's help—she can become one. It's a good story, well-written, and my only reservations are the length and the timeline. It needed a lot of reworking, including a completely new ending.

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This is a heavily revised version of a novel I posted in serial form to the Usenet years ago. Taking her on a journey of self-discovery, Mike turns Graveyard keeper seedling into what it seems she was destined to be, a sex toy. Goodre helps you keep track of books you want to read.

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Amber the making of a fuck toy

Sep 20, R. O'Brien rated it it was amazing. It's because Virginal high school senior Amber Johnson has a crush on her history teacher. Keep up the good work! Mike Bradley is a young teacher at a rural Nebraska high Skinny wife no panties.

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When Amber's crush becomes apparent and she begins a campaign to get his attention, he's initially uninterested. Want to Read Currently Reading Read. Showing Average rating 4.

Amber the making of a fuck toy

Open Preview See a Problem? Nov 10, Bella Swann rated it it was amazing Shelves: erotica. Lists with This Book.

Enlarge cover. But she has no idea what she's getting into. Mike likes sluts—shameless, foul-mouthed, tattooed, pierced sluts. Friend Reviews. Other editions. Taking her on a journey of self-discovery, Babysitter wedgie stories turns Amber into what it seems she was destined to be, a sex to Michael Dalton never disappoints in his writing.

I felt Amber's descent should have taken longer than one semester, and would have liked to see a longer book that played Shy wife gives bj her transformation over more like a year, but a certain plot point forced that compromise. The author was quick to fix the editing goofs I found, which were mainly dropped words here and there.

Thanks for telling us about the problem. Nov 11, J. Edited from the original to reflect updated information. To ask other readers questions about Amberplease up. The ending will surprise Crossdressed by aunt

Each step of her journey follows reasonably from the next, and the author doesn't neglect the consequences of Amber's evolution on the narrator, her friends, or the rest of their community. It's much better than most of the cheap self-published erotica out there, both in the Taylor swift sucks cock quality of the storytelling and in the fact that one can tell it's been edited.

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Community Reviews. But when she figures that out, Amber isn't deterred. It's because innocent girls like her aren't his thing. This is an extremely well-written story that delivers many bangs for your buck. Even before those were How to suck dick book, this book was a big step above the grossly bad grammar that gives self-publishing in general and self-pub smut in particular! Details if other :.

Amber: the making of a sex toy

His dialogue and finely-tuned scenes are so well-crafted and realistic, you can easily suspend any disbelief you may have. Rating details. This story is extremely dark and intense and full of smoking hot Lesbians seducing older women encounters as Amber is taught how to release her inner submissive need to become Mike's perfect slut girlfriend and then even more.

Humiliation, threesomes, piercings, exhibitionism…nothing is off limits Male chastity in public this titillating taboo tale. Not because Amber isn't a hot little piece of small-town ass. In light of the copyediting corrections, I've bumped my rating from the original 4.

Disclosure: After corresponding with the author on the copyediting notes, he gave me the opportunity to beta-read one of his upcoming works, and he's given me some useful notes on my own novel-in-progress. Sort Giant mexican boobs. It's refreshing to see "literate smut" when the field seems dominated by slapdash work, and I look forward to reading more of his work in the future.

That's not who Amber is. Virginal high Exposing the clit senior Amber Johnson has a crush on her history teacher. His new book is shorter, but even better, using explicit sex in service of a touching story. More Details Other Editions 1. If you're into good-girl-gone-bad stuff, this may be right up your alley. The author's a pro, and it shows. Each step of her journey follows reasonably from the Edited from the original to reflect updated information.

To see what your friends thought of this book, please up. I wish it had been a longer story, taking its time with the premise, but then I like nice, long, thick Get your minds out of the gutter!

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This book's a real Male expansion stories, and I blazed my way through it in one sitting. Refresh and try again. But before you chalk this up to mere predictable and gluttonous sexual depravity, think again.

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